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update on my writing

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alright everybody so i've decided to put that little preview on a writing site (linked above) to get some more feed back. i'll still be posting updates on it on here but this will be getting reviews from people who go out looking for writing. i just wanted to let you guys know i have made a few changes to what i've wrote ( not much changed some wording added a small amount) if you guys click the link it'll bring you straight to my profile on there (my screen name was available there too :D) please let me know what you think if you get the chance to :) im gonna post the fully changed up one on here soon :) thanks guys btw in order to let you guys know which one of my posts are more of the book and relate to the book im gonna keep using that same picture to show which ones they are.
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Posted: 2012-03-12 22:46:57

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    drakengard85 - replied 2012-03-13 02:26:03
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    Would you mind if I gave you some editing suggestions and feedback?
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      24paperwings - replied 2012-03-13 09:22:57
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      I would gladly accept that :) thats exactly what i'm looking for and need because i want this to be appealing to everybody :) constructive criticism is what allows us all to learn what we are doing wrong or could improve on
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