ghettoshen

Like I said. "...when someone changes their thinking based solely on what someone else tells them, that's wrong."

Rats. Look at the illustration.

And that is why there is such thing as agnostic. You shouldn't have to have people make you doubt yourself to be open minded about things. Changes comes through experience. If a person experiences something that changes their thinking, so be it. But when someone changes their thinking based solely on what someone else tells them, that's wrong.

Then again, what hasn't been done? My name is has been too done. I'm thinking start at the climax and explain situations leading up to it. Not sure if your story would fit that kind of structure but just throwing ideas out. Or maybe change from first person to third and start by describing the environment and then throw out the name. That's just my preference though, I hate writing in first person.

If this is going to be Chapter One, don't start off with "My name is...." Too cliche and it has been since Moby Dick. Use something creative, I'm sure you'll figure something out.

I'm not getting into another argument that will inevitably end in, "I'm right and you're wrong and there's nothing you can do about it." The point is, stop trying to make people doubt themselves because you wouldn't want people to do it to you. Oh, the elusive Golden Rule.

Prologue is too detailed. Give background of the events of the story rather than the characters in the story. This is actually a good start to the first chapter.

The fact that this debate's sole purpose is to make people angry and then question their beliefs.

Hmm...interesting....

All I'm reading is blah blah blah, my opinion is right and your's is wrong. There's been too many debates over this and now we're adding another to shove doubt into people's minds. All I ever hear atheists/theists say is that they want to believe what they want to believe and people should stop trying to change that. Take some of your own medicine. All of you.

Ertrov, I remember about a year or so ago you were one that defended Christianity. What happened? Now you're an Agnostic Atheist. I'm not trying to get into an argument or anything, I just want to know what changed.

Just would like to point out that I tripped up on this one. I couldn't read the word 'letters'. Why? There's no 'r'. That is all.

Guys, no homo but the pure emotion and pain coming out of this song made me tear up especially when Tim was sitting there calling out names of the victims of suicide. It's a terrible thing when people are pushed to that point.

You should add me on the list. That would be nice of you.

Not sure if this whitelist thing is still going on but I would like to join this server, the username is ghettoshen

So what's this? 300 key changes, 45 grand pauses, random cracks and growls? And they still applauded?

Ahhh mine wins.

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And here's the wallpaper.

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