NO GRAMMAR NAZI'S ALLOWED!

This is basically a gothic version of harry potter written by some goth girl (supposedly) this is just chapter 17 there is much more of this stuff, its so terrible its actually hilarious.

If you want to read the whole thing follow this link:

http://encyclopediadramatica.com/My_Immortal/Chapter1-11

Anyways, enjoy! Rate +3 if you like :)


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  • 4

    HolyFuckPolygon-ThisIsAmazing-ItActuallyMadeMeLolHahahaha:')+3AndMoreIfICould

    Space? Right there ←-- Its actually used for something.
    - arrowdodger7 October 14, 2010, 9:49 am
    His keyboard was broken.
    - SuDoku October 14, 2010, 9:55 am
    aww. you sure?
    - arrowdodger7 October 14, 2010, 9:58 am
    Yeah, go on his profile and check his comments, it was broken for ages :)
    - SuDoku October 14, 2010, 9:59 am
    God damn it. now i feel bad.
    - arrowdodger7 October 14, 2010, 10:04 am
    Haha it's alright, loads of people don't realise. Give him a +1 or something lol
    - SuDoku October 14, 2010, 10:45 am
    And I gave him so much shit for that XD
    WHy don't he just buy (or steal) a new keyboard?
    - XxDaminalsxX October 14, 2010, 11:54 am
    I think he said he couldn't afford it or something, I can't remember. It's fixed now though XD
    - SuDoku October 14, 2010, 11:58 am
    I think Dawn, Dannyl, and me may have started a bandwagon here. You know how there's ask a dawn and dannyl? Well, hehe............ I made one too XD
    - XxDaminalsxX October 14, 2010, 12:01 pm
    Bumping you posts, you cheeky shit...

    *rushes off to take a nosey*

    ;)
    - SuDoku October 14, 2010, 12:09 pm
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  • 2

    DUMBLYDORE!


    Wow...

    • Albane
    • June 3, 2010, 12:25 pm
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  • 2

    that just made my day you have earned all the points and respect i could possibly can give you unless you are the one who wrote that. :)

    • gw2250
    • June 6, 2010, 4:23 am
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  • 2

    MY EYES!!!!!!!! IT BURNSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! Too many spelling mistakes... can't... see x.x

    • noodle
    • June 6, 2010, 7:39 am
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  • 1

    i wish the guy did more or these

    It's actually a typo. The mistake lies within motor skills, not intellect.
    - iGreenDay August 12, 2011, 6:28 am
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  • 1

    Personally, I like Harry Potter. Many people did. It won a lot of awards, but if you ask me, the writer of this should get a Nobel Prize.

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  • 1

    'and a long black bread' hahahah that made me LOL

    • Goober
    • June 5, 2010, 4:43 am
    It was the fact he was absolutely wetting himself at the end with the Avril Lavigne bit that got me XD
    - SuDoku October 14, 2010, 9:55 am
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    "cum back"

    • reject
    • June 5, 2010, 6:32 am
    You mean "come back." This post makes me want to commit suicide.
    - GrammarNaziIsHere October 29, 2010, 4:29 am
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    omg i cant breath!!!!

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  • 1

    Wiv big bobs and everyfing

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  • 1

    I've just lost all faith in Humanity, and now feel the Human Race has failed as a whole. I'm now going to go into a spiraling depression followed by the insane notion that I am no longer human, all in order to spare myself having to be in any way related to this. I also believe I'm crying blood right now, but turned off the lights in an effort to blind myself. =T-T=

    • Dawn
    • June 5, 2010, 3:33 pm
    I too have lost faith in humanity. The kids now are so FUCKING stupid. Yes, I am seventeen, but I believe that everything is going downhill. =(
    - arrowdodger7 October 14, 2010, 9:51 am
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  • 1

    ... this deppressed you that much?

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  • 1

    This is the reason why kids bring guns to school. I understand that now =-.-=

    • Dawn
    • June 6, 2010, 6:08 am
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    ok.... how did you get that from this video?

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  • 1

    No, I got it from reading the first twenty chapters of the short story myself... If I had to deal with any people like the author everyday... I'd be pissed...

    • Dawn
    • June 6, 2010, 10:38 am
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    Haha, i didn't write it. thanks :)

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  • 1

    ohhhh.... you still feel depressed... i feel it!

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  • 1

    i see nightmare isnt here

    • hightec
    • September 24, 2010, 3:29 pm
    "I see Nightmare isn't here."
    - GrammarNaziIsHere October 29, 2010, 4:30 am
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  • 1

    omg.. this is so bad it made me lmao +3

    "Oh my God. This is so bad it made me laugh my ass off." +3
    - GrammarNaziIsHere October 29, 2010, 4:31 am
    "Oh my God. This is so bad, it made me laugh my ass off."
    - xRAYZ0Rx October 29, 2010, 1:09 pm
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  • 1

    you want bad grammar? ill give you bad grammar

    I'm a Grammar Nazi and Full Life Consequences is hilarious to me.
    - GrammarNaziIsHere October 29, 2010, 4:26 am
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    this girl is hilarious.

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    Guess who has invaded this post, just as he did to Poland?

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