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    not bad dude but try and slow it down a bit its not always about speed and try to reduce the echos and stuff but props its not bad

    Yeah used a shity mic, the last two parts are just free style, first couple parts i wrote haha
    - tyduran13 August 20, 2012, 3:55 pm
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    Eh not bad, first song you have done?

    Eh not really, first one in a very looooong time though haha
    - tyduran13 August 16, 2012, 12:59 pm
    Hmm well its not bad :)
    - BOBSAGET August 16, 2012, 1:02 pm
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    You just gotta slow down a bit

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    Mic quality needs to improve a lot, I think that's why your words sound weird not how fast you say them. It sounds really out of place with the much better quality audio.

    Second one sounds better i think
    - tyduran13 August 21, 2012, 1:25 pm
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    I cannot stress how much I like the instrumental, that being said, you need to invest in a good mic

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    I write music too ^.^
    who's the producer?
    yeah the mic needs to improve & I'm not here to tell you how to kick your flow but work on not slurring your syllables too much.

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    Did you make the beat? I don't want to say buy a mic, because everyone else did, but you really really do need to

    Naw didn't make it it's whistle by flo rida haha
    - tyduran13 August 21, 2012, 1:25 pm
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    I DO!... Sorry I haven't even looked at the post yet... I'll go do that now.


    white i do resized


    Edit: Personally I don't like rap, but quality aside, I noticed you're not hesitating and you're actually singing. (People will usually lose voice when they sing because they get all embarrassed. *Blush*) So yes, it is good.

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